Lost
Waves lashing by
Reflecting the nauseating sun
With Davy Jones’s chest calling me
With the lonely islands beckoning for company
This way or that
Where to go?
Here, there or nowhere
The world’s a big sphere – no corners, no ends
I walk the path –A path created
Or should I take a path unknown – a path I create
The path of forks, twists, turns and bends
Obstacles plenty trip me down
Raging mountains and clouding forests
Evil forces of darkness found
Guiding bird – misguided by the “too much”
Too much to listen
To much to see
It clouds the reason
The rationale failing
I look at the senseless logic… trying to create sense
Like Atlas’s trick – Fooling the Herculean task
There is so much to be deceived
So much to overlook
The veil of glitter over the grey
And the real brightness fading away
O! Mighty one
Let the lights on – the fire alight
Let the path glow
Shining through the forests
Lest there be darkness and puzzled faces
Wondering just where to go?
All lost in this world of yours…



9 Comments:
At June 5, 2009 11:02 PM ,
john constantine said...
if ur marks are alright then u can attempt physics or chemistry honours then go for btech in computer science or do msc in physics/chem and sit for ssc to get into teaching business or apply for phd to get into being a junior fellow researcher...
really lucrative ones...
what about ur jee result??
and the poem was nice.....
At June 6, 2009 12:32 AM ,
abhi said...
excellent poem...mainly the "too much" part...
...but the note's below should not have been written..it is spoiling the fun...
At June 6, 2009 8:46 PM ,
Sanket Korgaonkar said...
Its fine if the poem is philosphical - many are - jst try to make sure your metaphors are tied off and convey what you want. Then again, you can choose not to. And I agree with abhi, art should always be left for the viewer to be interpreted in his own way - don't interfere with that - so try to avoid any footnotes or explanations after ...
At June 8, 2009 12:54 PM ,
Mohammed Musthafa said...
hey...
actually, i guess im not the kind thts able to appreciate such philosophical poems...for sum reason, i stick to ones tht have complete rhyme schemes and talk in plain language...
At June 18, 2009 12:23 AM ,
guru niki :) said...
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At June 20, 2009 6:06 PM ,
Simply Ridiculous said...
Nice poem!!
At July 1, 2009 8:27 AM ,
sucharita said...
really a nice wonder.keep it up.
At July 6, 2009 12:18 AM ,
Aparna said...
nicely wriiten!
you will sure sort it out yourself
At July 14, 2009 11:37 PM ,
Aritry Das said...
well written =)
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